I really like your idea! It's very energetic, sporadic and is giving me t+pazolite vibes. Structure wise, it's very random which is nice for this kind of style. However, i would of wished for some more variation, like a new main bass or a new lead sound. I really like the Camellia-like sporadic drum section at 1:35, but I do think it goes on for a bit too long. Mixing wise, I think the kick could have been a lot punchier and I think some more percussion elements wouldn't hurt. Also, the lead melody really needs some sidechaining. The part at the end is nice, but I think it goes on for a bit too long. Other than that, it's a really cool track! Absolutely love the voice samples and those low-pass interludes. I also just love the beginning as it gives me chrome vox vibes :D