Mr Eggburt seems like such a douche lmao
Some great stuff here. I really love the piano setting an immediate, cosmic-like atmosphere thats really fitting. It really got me hooked! The mixing is great. The weird percussions are really shinging through, while not overpowering everything else. I'm really impressed how you managed to create such a powerful atmosphere in just a one minute track. Great job! :)
Thank you, I'm glad you liked it! Seeing as most of my songs are only a minute, I should really expand them. Mr Eggburt is a douche, you got that right :)
I really like the atmosphere this track has and i love the intro. It does a great job of setting the tone of this whole track. It's really dark while still being fun. There is also a great amount of musicality which is especially present in the beginning and in the interlude. I also love that you've kept the track so versatile. It never felt repetitive. My favorite parts are probably around 1:31 and 3:40. I like 1:31 because of the great musicality and 3:40 because it's a great mix between heavy speedcore and an uplifting melody. It sounds even better after I've read the story, because it really felt like a fight with lots of emotions involved. Mixing wise, I wouldn't say it's your best. The speedcore kick, especially in the later parts, isn't really... present. You can hear that it's being drowned out by the other elements playing. However I understand that mixing a speedcore track with lots of elements playing at the same time is hard. I really like your idea though and I love this huge amount of versatility this track has. Great job!
thanks man, im glad you enjoyed the atmosphere i tried to set for the song lol. As for the mixing, ill try my best to improve it in a later update. But anyways thanks for the feedback.
I really, really love this man. Even without reading the story, I kinda imagined my own while listening to this. I like that you kept the song so versatile. That way it doesn't become boring and it really engulfes you. My favorite part is probably 0:57. The Psy bass is sooo good and I love these little sounds thrown in there. It really creates an intense atmosphere. It's very space-like! The part at 2:19 is cool, but caught me off guard a bit, because it's such a stark contrast to the previous part. I really like 3:13 as it's very calming and storytelling. Lovely midsection! It's even better now as I read the story. 4:39 threw me off first, but then I read the story and I loved it haha. It's very sporadic and these voice samples really underline the chaos that is going on. I really like it though and it fits to the theme of the song.
Overall, awesome track. I can tell that a lot of work went into it. You really get better and better with each song. I would even say that it's my favorite song from you yet :)
Keep up the great work!
(sorry for my English)
I'm glad you like it bro. Even though i made it in 2 d a y s I still put a lot of effort into it and it means a lot that you consider this one your fav from me lol. And I'm glad you like the story as well as i put a lot of effort into making the atmosphere represent the story well. That reminds me, i still have to write down the stories i made for my other songs lol. Well anyways, I'm glad you like this one and ill try to get more songs finished in the future.
Love it. The title is giving me serious camellia vibes lol
lmao funny enough i wasn't actually inspired by camellia when writing it lolol
Thank God for the waveform. Otherwise I would have died from a heart attack haha. Other than the ending, this is pretty smooth song. I like it! Gonna troll a few friends with this...
Man the waveform be ruining the surprise lolol. Other than that thx, I hope you catch some people off guard with this lol.
I really like your idea! It's very energetic, sporadic and is giving me t+pazolite vibes. Structure wise, it's very random which is nice for this kind of style. However, i would of wished for some more variation, like a new main bass or a new lead sound. I really like the Camellia-like sporadic drum section at 1:35, but I do think it goes on for a bit too long. Mixing wise, I think the kick could have been a lot punchier and I think some more percussion elements wouldn't hurt. Also, the lead melody really needs some sidechaining. The part at the end is nice, but I think it goes on for a bit too long. Other than that, it's a really cool track! Absolutely love the voice samples and those low-pass interludes. I also just love the beginning as it gives me chrome vox vibes :D
hehe thanks, I was inspired a lot by both of them when it comes to the structure and the voice samples. And about the other things, I use garageband so im very limited when it comes to this stuff. For example, theres not a lot of good kicks to choose from I just chose the one i thought was best. And with the lead, im only allowed to use 32 instruments for some reason and it took like 10 instruments to make the main lead and i used the other slots for things like the drums, basses, and the vocal samples. And about the ending, because garageband wasn't built to make hardcore by the time i was done with 3 mins it was way too laggy for me to do anything so i just ended it short cause my original plan was for it to be way longer. But other than that thx man.
I really like this vibe. Especially in the drop. Good job!
thanks :)
Wow this is really cool! Reminds me of 2014/2015 Dubstep. I Really like this!
Oh Thank you bro, i appreciate it
That was disgusting! (in a good way)
I love the breaks in the drop and that snare is insane. It does become a bit repetitive after a while, but the track is still insane.
Also I love the fnaf sample at the beginning lmao
THANKS!!!
That was actually quite nice! I really like the synth choice and the general groove of the track. The dubstep growls in the drop are really nice too. The mix is a bit harsh though and the track could have a bit more low end. Also, try not using the standard fl drums. There are way better drums out there that you can use.
Overall, I like the atmosphere of the track and the drops are quite nice. Just work on your mixing skills. You really have potential! :)
Thanks for the review. I am really trying hard to learn mixing. One of my friends told me the same thing.
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